Monday, November 26, 2007

Outline for "Ambush" By Tim O' Brien

ITHS
Steffy Zambrano
September 29,2007
Ms.Hyde

How War Affects People
I. When a war is fought people believe that it is two countries fighting, but when those soldiers finish fighting those wars they have to fight within themselves. In the short story “Ambush ” by Tim O’ Brien he has fantasies about the war he once fought in. After a soldier fights a war h is life is changed forever, and he has been affected by this war. If the people that are not fighting in the war are not affected and hurt, imagine the people that are fighting and that have to live with that trauma forever . Sometimes families and friends try and be there for you but it’s hard for you because you know that no matter how hard you try to erase that memory its going to be impossible because what you experience is not easy to forget. They say “that time heals all wounds” but what if the wound isn’t external, but an internal memory that keeps replaying.


II. Body Paragraph 2-4 & Topic Sentences:
(A)How War Affects us and the people who fight
1. How we live with regret
2. Were not able to tell anyone and the one way th e narrator talks about are in his war stories
3. Can’t move on in life.

(B)The Narrator lives with regret
1. Keeps Writing War stories
2. How afraid he is in telling his daughter that he killed someone
3. How he has fantasies of the young men.

(C) Anti-War Story/ War Story
1. War story
2. Kiowa told him “It was a good kill”


Conclusion: In Conclusion, as you can tell by this Short story autobiographical text War has big impacts on your life, and not only for you but for your family and friends. Different people take it in many different ways some might say that’s what’s suppose to happen and some might see it as a big mistake in life. War might cause Fear or strength but mainly it causes Fear because for the first time you feel like you made a huge mistake and for some reason it won’t go away.

1 comment:

Christian's Govt Blog said...

good conclusion and I like how you put up the topics on what you wrote about good work